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Caryl Fanfiction Jan 12, 2017 11:29:10 GMT -5 gia likes this

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Jan 12, 2017 10:51:12 GMT -5 gia said:

Jan 12, 2017 6:40:20 GMT -5 AlienSoul said:

lmao. It was great! I want a scene like that on the show with some adjustments.

Never gonna get it. I know.

It was very true to the actual characters.
Right amount of awkward, right amount of snark, right amount of humor.

I would love to see it, too.

I can't see Daryl actually agreeing to strip down. But I could be wrong.

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Caryl Fanfiction Jan 12, 2017 15:45:05 GMT -5

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Jan 12, 2017 11:29:10 GMT -5 AlienSoul said:

Jan 12, 2017 10:51:12 GMT -5 gia said:

It was very true to the actual characters.
Right amount of awkward, right amount of snark, right amount of humor.

I would love to see it, too.

I can't see Daryl actually agreeing to strip down. But I could be wrong.

I could see him doing it the way it was done in the story. Because she was making it funny and normal, so he might just say wtf, why not.

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Caryl Fanfiction Jan 12, 2017 15:48:06 GMT -5 greaterpursuit and gia like this

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Post by AlienSoul on Jan 12, 2017 15:48:06 GMT -5

Jan 12, 2017 15:45:05 GMT -5 gia said:

Jan 12, 2017 11:29:10 GMT -5 AlienSoul said:

I can't see Daryl actually agreeing to strip down. But I could be wrong.

I could see him doing it the way it was done in the story. Because she was making it funny and normal, so he might just say wtf, why not.

Maybe. As I've said before, sometimes it's hard to imagine a character/someone do/say something you've never seen them do/say before until you see them do/say it and then you're like, "That was surprising but it didn't seem unnatural at all." Like with the Terminus hug aka Daryl's first on-screen hug. I heard even some Carylers had a hard time imagining DARYL run towards someone. But we all saw it and it felt perfectly natural. So I'm not going to say that a scenario like in that fic is that impaulsible.

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gia Red Shirt Posts: 347	Caryl Fanfiction Jan 13, 2017 23:29:58 GMT -5 v likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by gia on Jan 13, 2017 23:29:58 GMT -5 Dec 28, 2016 10:55:12 GMT -5 v said: this fic is from 2012 and is still one of my all time favorites www.fanfiction.net/s/7976054/1/Man-of-Honour-Woman-of-Worth Loved it.

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Caryl Fanfiction Jan 13, 2017 23:52:45 GMT -5 gia likes this

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Jan 13, 2017 23:29:58 GMT -5 gia said:

Dec 28, 2016 10:55:12 GMT -5 v said:

this fic is from 2012 and is still one of my all time favorites
www.fanfiction.net/s/7976054/1/Man-of-Honour-Woman-of-Worth

Loved it.

I read it about once a month or so. it is so well written and sweet. Got to love it

“No. I mean, Daryl loved Beth as much as he loved Sophia. There wasn’t a romantic relationship there, in my opinion. I think that there was a camaraderie, there was a friendship, there was an understanding, but, it’s not like there was this great romance that didn’t happen because she died. She was very young. He maybe fell in love with her the way someone can become a surrogate father or surrogate older brother. They had a tremendous connection, but not everything has to be a romantic relations

AlienSoul Grady Security Officer Posts: 720	Caryl Fanfiction Jan 17, 2017 13:59:53 GMT -5 Sexual Chocolate likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by AlienSoul on Jan 17, 2017 13:59:53 GMT -5 WHY IS THIS STORY SO BEAUTIFUL? And why can't the show give us character moments like these. Like they used to. How Carol Got Her Groove Back - A new amazing chapter. ((

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Caryl Fanfiction Jan 17, 2017 14:38:43 GMT -5 AlienSoul and weeds_or_wildflowers like this

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Jan 17, 2017 13:59:53 GMT -5 AlienSoul said:

WHY IS THIS STORY SO BEAUTIFUL? And why can't the show give us character moments like these. Like they used to.

How Carol Got Her Groove Back - A new amazing chapter.

((

I love this fic and the last chapter is the type of quality content I would love to see on the show. Instead we get McGimple and the fast food version of storytelling.

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Caryl Fanfiction Jan 17, 2017 14:48:22 GMT -5 weeds_or_wildflowers likes this

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Jan 17, 2017 14:38:43 GMT -5 Sexual Chocolate said:

Jan 17, 2017 13:59:53 GMT -5 AlienSoul said:

WHY IS THIS STORY SO BEAUTIFUL? And why can't the show give us character moments like these. Like they used to.

How Carol Got Her Groove Back - A new amazing chapter.

((

I love this fic and the last chapter is the type of quality content I would love to see on the show. Instead we get McGimple and the fast food version of storytelling.

^^^ It saddens me how many opportunities Gimple has wasted with these amazing characters who have so much potential... I'm thankful we have so many amazing fic writers in the Caryl fandom.

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Caryl Fanfiction Jan 17, 2017 15:11:37 GMT -5 AlienSoul and weeds_or_wildflowers like this

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Post by Sexual Chocolate on Jan 17, 2017 15:11:37 GMT -5

AlienSoul I created a thread the other day asking how long TWD (tv) could go without any major conflict and still be considered good, interesting, and even exciting. And Carol and Daryl skinning possums is exactly what I'm talking about. Just imagine if that made it to tv. I'm putting this behind a spoiler for those who haven't read the story/chapter.

SPOILER: Click to show

{Spoiler}
It show us how they survive. Daryl teaching Carol.
Gives us a peek into Daryl's childhood. That a soft touch from his father predicted violence to come.
Tells us that Daryl watches the other men to see how they behave with women and each other.
How the only time Ed showed "affection" in public is when other men paid her attention.
The sweet awkwardness of Caryl walking together like "hormone-drunk teenagers"
The frequency of Glaggie's make out sessions and what Carol and Daryl think about them.

So much went on in that one chapter, and no one can convince me something of similar quality can't and shouldn't be transferred to screen. This is true character development.

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Caryl Fanfiction Jan 17, 2017 15:27:00 GMT -5 Sexual Chocolate and weeds_or_wildflowers like this

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Post by AlienSoul on Jan 17, 2017 15:27:00 GMT -5

Sexual Chocolate , I couldn't agree more with everything you said. And I read that thread of yours and that's exactly the kind of scenes that I've been missing from the show for I don't know how long. I've always loved horror but only when the story is character-driven. I fell in love with TWD because it had that once. Not so much anymore. :/ It's like TPTB think that taking a moment to check in on Carl or Daryl or Carol and getting into their psyche when the intention isn't simply to move the main plot forward is filler, a waste of screentime.

I've been rewatching bits from the first couple of seasons and it's amazing how just about every scene is so well-written and character-driven that I rarely want to skip ahead even when I only start en episode with the intention of rewatching a certain scene (coughUsuallyCarylcough). The dialogue seems to be from a different universe and I really do think of Seasons 1-3 and Seasons 4-now as two separate universes.

On-topic: I've been waiting for Silversundown to update her A Sixth Sense fic for two days now. I'm feeling so impatient. At least I got my "Groove" fix, even though it only made me want more.

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Sexual Chocolate Retired Moderator formerly frankburns Posts: 4,681	Caryl Fanfiction Jan 17, 2017 15:37:15 GMT -5 AlienSoul likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sexual Chocolate on Jan 17, 2017 15:37:15 GMT -5 AlienSoul Sixth Sense is another good one.

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Caryl Fanfiction Jan 17, 2017 17:21:06 GMT -5 AlienSoul likes this

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Jan 17, 2017 17:15:25 GMT -5 AlienSoul said:

Sexual Chocolate Chapter Nine!

(I'm really sorry for spamming this thread.)

I'm at work and need to finish a project before I can read it. *everything hurts*

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Caryl Fanfiction Jan 20, 2017 22:18:30 GMT -5 v and AlienSoul like this

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Post by gia on Jan 20, 2017 22:18:30 GMT -5

The tabs up at the top of my little tablet screen are now all Caryl fan fiction.

I have The Long Way Home (read before, reading again) Man Of Honor Woman Of Worth (loved it!), How Carol Got Her Groove Back (loving it!), Sixth Sense (read just enough to know I'll love it, can't wait!)
I love reading about season 2/3, and love realistic ones with humor and concern.
I wish these writers wrote for the show....

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Caryl Fanfiction Jan 22, 2017 11:51:30 GMT -5

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Post by gia on Jan 22, 2017 11:51:30 GMT -5

Stopped to read Slow Burn ( thought it was shorter than it is), and it's very well done but I do have one problem with some fan fictions.
Please stop having Carol giggle.
Carol doesn't giggle. She smirks, she laughs, she probably snort laughs, but she doesn't giggle.
She's not 12.

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Caryl Fanfiction Jan 23, 2017 16:55:52 GMT -5 gia likes this

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Post by AlienSoul on Jan 23, 2017 16:55:52 GMT -5

Another great one by Trogdor19. Reading this right now. *screams internally* It's for the ninelives challenge "Fix it": Carol saves Daryl at the Saviors' compound, being a Queen and kicking ass! Also full of wonderful raw, beautiful, emotional moments.

She could write my study notes and I'd actually read them.

*goes to finish the fic*

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Starlight Original Survivor Rainbows Posts: 6,279	Caryl Fanfiction Feb 12, 2017 13:33:32 GMT -5 Mia likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Starlight on Feb 12, 2017 13:33:32 GMT -5 New one from the ramblin rose Waltzing Matilda

Sexual Chocolate Retired Moderator formerly frankburns Posts: 4,681	Caryl Fanfiction Feb 14, 2017 3:05:56 GMT -5 Starlight and yuna like this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sexual Chocolate on Feb 14, 2017 3:05:56 GMT -5 Aug 9, 2016 13:02:21 GMT -5 Starlight said: Reading this one by ICanStopAnytime Playing House This was me. 89 chapters of pure Caryl goodness.

Starlight Original Survivor Rainbows Posts: 6,279	Caryl Fanfiction Feb 21, 2017 15:08:20 GMT -5 AlienSoul likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Starlight on Feb 21, 2017 15:08:20 GMT -5 One shot by leigh57 yes a heart will always go one step too far

greaterpursuit Original Survivor Posts: 1,700	Caryl Fanfiction Feb 21, 2017 20:49:39 GMT -5 Sexual Chocolate, gia, and 1 more like this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by greaterpursuit on Feb 21, 2017 20:49:39 GMT -5 I foresee many new fan fics in the coming days and weeks

Starlight Original Survivor Rainbows Posts: 6,279	Caryl Fanfiction Feb 27, 2017 13:17:09 GMT -5 Mia likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Starlight on Feb 27, 2017 13:17:09 GMT -5 New one from ramblinrose Something to Return To

Starlight Original Survivor Rainbows Posts: 6,279	Caryl Fanfiction Mar 24, 2017 13:17:08 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Starlight on Mar 24, 2017 13:17:08 GMT -5 Liking this on so far by LeeLeeWoflpack My Lil' Asskicker

Starlight Original Survivor Rainbows Posts: 6,279	Caryl Fanfiction May 1, 2017 8:31:18 GMT -5 sonia and Mia like this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Starlight on May 1, 2017 8:31:18 GMT -5 New one from ramblinrose. It's A Dog's Life

yuna Woodbury Partygoer Posts: 122	Caryl Fanfiction May 12, 2017 21:28:36 GMT -5 merelei likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by yuna on May 12, 2017 21:28:36 GMT -5 Bad Seed Rising by foreverlovingdaryldixon. I can't wait for the next chapter I really enjoyed reading this fanfiction.
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Starlight Original Survivor Rainbows Posts: 6,279	Caryl Fanfiction May 22, 2017 10:41:05 GMT -5 weeds_or_wildflowers likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Starlight on May 22, 2017 10:41:05 GMT -5 One shot by darylsdiva1 The Edge of the End of the World

sonia Original Survivor Posts: 484	Caryl Fanfiction Jun 13, 2017 21:33:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sonia on Jun 13, 2017 21:33:40 GMT -5 I've just discovered a very talented writer that I am excited about. Her user name is Geektaire. I've just finished reading Nothing Else Matters and I highly recommend it.

sonia Original Survivor Posts: 484	Caryl Fanfiction Jun 15, 2017 21:28:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sonia on Jun 15, 2017 21:28:44 GMT -5 It's supposed to be raining all weekend. I predict I will be reading fan fictions, drink coffee and wine and watch Netflix. There are worst ways to spend weekends, right? Rain is not such a bad thing after all.

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Caryl Fanfiction Jul 9, 2017 21:30:06 GMT -5 Starlight likes this

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For some reason, a story escaped me last summer. I usually don't miss any. So now I'm reading a long multi-chapter story (89 chapters of Caryl goodness! Yay!) titled Playing House, from ICanStopAnytime. It's sooooooo good and funny! I absolutely love it.

sonia Original Survivor Posts: 484	Caryl Fanfiction Jul 9, 2017 21:32:18 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sonia on Jul 9, 2017 21:32:18 GMT -5 I just saw that Sexual Chocolate pretty much wrote the same thing back in February. Great minds think alike
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sonia Original Survivor Posts: 484	Caryl Fanfiction Aug 12, 2017 20:41:06 GMT -5 honkytonkwoman likes this Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by sonia on Aug 12, 2017 20:41:06 GMT -5 I am reading Home Was a Dream, from ICanStopAnytime. She is such a talented writer. Great story!